Hello readers!
As you can see, I have published one story called "The silhouette of the shiver". We have done 9 different stories in pairs and we have written one paragraph each of pair in our classmate's stories. In this one, my colleague and me have done the first and the last paragraphs. We decided to make a thriller story. However, I don't like that main character that dies, apart from that it's fine. So, this is one of the result of our work. I hope you will like it!
A man got up of his bed and the first thing that he saw for his surprise was a letter that it was in the little table of his bedroom and he took carefully and at the same time worried with his bony and skeletal fingers. He didn’t know what to do with the anonymous envelope, it was quite big and he was sure that it hides more than a simple words, this could change his future in one open and close eyes. The bedroom was absolutely old, without looked after. The man put with a frivolous care the glass eye that was floating seconds before in a bowl, for him this was an ordinary and common effort, an effort that started since he received the first letter.
He decided to open the letter. Inside the letter he found a finger with a note. In the note was written a sentence “You find the killer of my son or I will say your secret to the authority of the city, and then you and your family will die”. Evaristo was preoccupied. Nobody knew his secret before, except his servant. The first thing he did when he opened and read the letter was to go to his servant and he asked for help.
The servant didn’t know anything about the letter and he believed him because when he was his servant, Evaristo noticed that the servant had never lied to him. Evaristo asked to help him with the case, and the servant accepted very nicely. They didn’t know what to do and they started thinking. Evaristo noticed that he told his secret to somebody before he told to his servant.
Because of the secret he had, he was very depreciated. So to forget his pains he started drinking beer one after the other. He was very drunk when he started to say things without thinking what was saying. He remembered that he saw a man with a strange aspect and he started to talk with him. The boy was asking a lot of things about his life to Evaristo and caused by the alcohol Evaristo told him everything. Including the secret he had.
While he was remembering that, he realise that he didn’t know anything about the strange man, and he neither remember his face. He was involved in a dangerous situation and he had to do something as quickly as he can. He didn’t know how to start investigating and he decided to turn to a detective that he know. Immediately, Evaristo left the house and took the way to the police station. He found it closed and he returned home to relax due to his tiredness. There he found a new letter.
He started worrying, he decided to not open the letter. He didn’t feel safe so he went to the wardrobe and he took his gun. Suddenly he heard:
- Evaristo, are you sure? It's not a good idea to take the gun.- Evaristo was becoming mad, he couldn’t see anybody talking to him. And he answered:
- If you want to talk to me, talk be face to face!. He waited for 3 seconds. After he noticed that something was walking backwards him. He didn’t do anything, he just looked back and he saw himself in the other side of the mirror, and suddenly, he saw a ghost hand. He looked better, and he saw a ghost talking to his hear:
-Evaristo, now that I know your secret, don’t you think that its a bad idea to shoot that gun?
Evaristo was already mad, so he put his hand in his pocket to take the weapon but it was too late, the ghost had already taken a long knife, and it inserted in Evaristo’s heard saying with a threatening voice:
-This is my revenge for my death son!
The ghost completed his revenge but there was a witness, the butler. The butler was in the kitchen preparing the dinner, suddenly he noticed that the air was getting cold, and he felt a shiver. All the objects of the room started to shake and then, he saw the ghost. He got scared he started to run, he took the phone and called the police but before he could say a thing the ghost pull him back and throw him to the floor. The ghost hold him from the throat and squeezed until the butler’s throat explode. Suddenly the ghost heard the sound of the police siren’s.
The police was knocking the door, before they entered into the room the ghost was hidden behind the armchair. Immediately, the ghost saw a police emblem for the slit of the wardrobe. Quietly and with an indescriptible care, with his ghost starched hand took the uniform of a police, the first of the two victims. He wore the uniform and took a diary that seems interesting. He started talking with the polices and he disappeared like an ordinary police, covered with sirens until his silhouette passed unnoticed in the horizon.
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In total we have created 9 stories, here you have the links to the other ones:
You should read them!
Today, we have done a QR code using Vocaroo, which is a voice recording tool. Doing this, our intention was to make a campaign to say NO to the violence against women. I don't know if you know it, but this monday, 
